In writing poems from the prose we were given, I found that
there were certain words that I was drawn to.
I think they became important to me in defining the story and I therefore
decided to include them in my poems. The
words lent a feeling and a lyrical quality while still remaining centered in
the theme or story of the poem. After
defining what words I should keep, the center of the poem became more evident
to me. This chronologically may not make
sense because I hadn't surly found the center before the words I would use, but
I think the words and their order significantly generate how we react. For instance, in a poem like “Jabberwocky” by Lewis Carroll the made-up words create the story through placement and sound.
When I found the center within my words, I went about
interacting them with each other and ultimately tried to find where they made
the most sense in regards to sound.
Paying attention to sound also influenced where line breaks would be as
well as the length of lines. By saying
different combinations aloud, I attempted to find where the words sat
comfortably. By comfortably, I do not
mean complacent; I only mean comfortable in relation to the overall feel and
presence the poem took when read, while still remaining engaging.
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